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Help Me With My Plot/title?


Hey guys, I’m a 14 year old from Canada. I enjoy writing books and fanfiction, making movies with my friends and family. I’m everywhere, I want to be in the nba, I want to be an author, I want to live my life to the fullest. By writing my first book, I need help with a few small parts, that is why I’m here. I honestly don’t want you guys to write my book for me, but I would love if you could give me pointers without the act of plagiarism. So, here’s the summary/plot of my book.
Connor Nite is a 16-year-old schoolboy who finds himself living under the roof to the house of his foster parents after the suspicious and untimely death of his father, Arthur Nite. Connor discovers his father was a spy agent working under the secrecy of SPA (Supernatural Protection Agency) on an important mission he couldn’t finish. Will Connor complete the heroic task his father had failed or end up the same way he did? Join Connor as he tracks down the bloody trail of his fathers assasin alongside the forces of SPA, where anything can happen.
So, I would love to know a few things:
– Is my spy organisation’s name fine, not too unrealistic/stupid?
– Is the plot creative/interesting? If not, what can I do to change it?
– Do you think the fact a 16 year old boy falling in to all this trouble is unrealistic, boring, etc?
– How can I make it so Connor finds out his dad’s a spy and unites with SPA to track down his murderer?
– What should the dad’s mission be? What’s the point in Connor killing the dad’s murderer? What did he do and how will he solve it?
– I’m a Canadian author, so should to setting of my novel take place somewhere in Canada? If so, where is the most common area for a spy and all this stuff take place?
– I don’t really want Connor, a 16 year old boy, to be killing people, I don’t want him to be a murderer YET, so how do you think I should go by this and have him get revenge but not reasonably kill his victim. I was thinking there would be non-armed killings, like a car chase or have someone else kill him, someone from SPA. If you know how I can get by this problem because it may be too graphic, do tell me!
Thanks guys, if you could answer this that would be greatly appreciated, I am sure I will take account everything you tell me, where it’s changing the whole novel because it’s too violent for a 16 year old. Anyways, thanks a lot, I promise I will give you credit somehow affiliated, and will remember you from time on. Thanks!

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Sexy And I Know It Original Song?


My mother insists she’s heard a song from a long time ago that contained the line “I’m sexy and I know it” and was not affiliated with LMFAO. Does anybody know what song she could be thinking of? She thinks it was probably an 80’s or 90’s song; my dad agrees with her.

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Which Bedspread Do You Like Better?(:?


I will be moving soon, and I get to design my room. I want to go for either a bohemian theme or a vintagey-romantic theme. So I was doing some online window shopping I guess you could call it, and I’m not sure which bedding I like better. They are both from Anthropologie (I have a quilt from there at my dad’s house and I LOVE it!):http://www.anthropologie.com/anthro/prod…
andhttp://www.anthropologie.com/anthro/prod…
Obviously, the Gila Quilt is cheaper, but I don’t know which I like better! Also, what colors would you do with the bedding? Sorry if this is a lot, haha. Thanks!
Oh! By the way, I’m a 13-year-old girl 🙂

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If My Dad Was An Fbi Agent Or Had Some Job Like That Would He Be Able To Tell His Family?


We live in a nice house and my dad was in the military a long time ago but stopped before I was born. I know he used to sell houses but since the market crash he can’t do that anymore.now he leaves the house at mysterious times, (even really really late at night sometimes) and I have no clue what his job is. I’ve asked my mom but she always gives me some bs and I can tell she’s lying. So could it be that my dad has some secret job we don’t know about?

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My Mom Found An Empty Box Of Condoms What Should I Respond?


Me and my girlfriend we had sex about a month ago and was her first time doing it as well as mine. We have been going out for almost a year and i had an empty box of condoms on my bag which my mom happen to go through my bag (even though she taught me to respect other’s stuff) and she found the empty box of condoms. i was going to soccer practice and on the way out she told me “what was that box on your bag?” and i just pretended i didn’t hear her and walked away, however, after i left the house she yelled “i’m telling your dad” and that alarmed me. My problem with this is that my mom she treats me like i was 10 even though i’m 17 almost turning 18 and it really bugs me because i can’t drive because of her belief that “you’re going to crash onto another car” even though the streets i drive in are basically empty and i have driven for over 1 year now. Also i can’t go to places besides the park in front of my house because she thinks “you’re going to get shot” or “you’re to smoke weed with your gangster friends” even though our neighborhood is calm and i don’t smoke weed nor i have friends who are affiliated to any gang. On the other side i have my dad who is an open minded person. He talks the problems out contrary to my mom which she starts yelling and accusing people of being gang members or stuff like that. My dad will talk out the problem with me if she tells him about the box of condoms she found of my bag but my mom will basically start WW3 about that box of condoms. Also my girlfriends parents are the really strict parents and i understand that and that’s why i used the condom in the first place, making sure she didn’t get pregnant or get any disease. I don’t want her parents to know about this but if there is no solution then i will attach to the consequences. How can i talk about this to my parents if they asked me about it? any suggestions. My girlfriend told me that if my mom disapproves me using them, then she’s denying safety from us by not letting me use the condoms. I know it’s not right having sex at such a young age but me and her talked through it for a long while and we both agree to attach to the consequences. Basically my problem is that how to discuss this with my parents? any suggestions?

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Where Can I Get Cheap,classy And Antique Furniture? In Delhi?


Hello,I am planning to shift and need new furniture for my house.Since all the money would be spent on the house,there will be little left for the furniture. I want to choose wisely before I buy furniture because I wouldn’t have any money left to change it. I have heard of flee markets which sell,old second hand furniture..Having said that,I want either antique furniture or very very contemporary classic furniture. I am also planning to keep a small swing in my room,where I can read and relax. Second hand stuff would be good enough. I have heard about embassys holding sales. my dad got beaauutiful curtains,bedspreads,sofas from there for his resort..Does anyone have an idea what these types of sales are and if they’ll be beneficial?
or perhaps other secret little markets you people might be aware about.
Also,where can I find cheap,HUGE,mirrors?
thanks a lot for patiently reading through. I’ll be thankful if even a few of these questions will be answered.
Thanks!

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