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Help Me With My Plot/title?


Hey guys, I’m a 14 year old from Canada. I enjoy writing books and fanfiction, making movies with my friends and family. I’m everywhere, I want to be in the nba, I want to be an author, I want to live my life to the fullest. By writing my first book, I need help with a few small parts, that is why I’m here. I honestly don’t want you guys to write my book for me, but I would love if you could give me pointers without the act of plagiarism. So, here’s the summary/plot of my book.
Connor Nite is a 16-year-old schoolboy who finds himself living under the roof to the house of his foster parents after the suspicious and untimely death of his father, Arthur Nite. Connor discovers his father was a spy agent working under the secrecy of SPA (Supernatural Protection Agency) on an important mission he couldn’t finish. Will Connor complete the heroic task his father had failed or end up the same way he did? Join Connor as he tracks down the bloody trail of his fathers assasin alongside the forces of SPA, where anything can happen.
So, I would love to know a few things:
– Is my spy organisation’s name fine, not too unrealistic/stupid?
– Is the plot creative/interesting? If not, what can I do to change it?
– Do you think the fact a 16 year old boy falling in to all this trouble is unrealistic, boring, etc?
– How can I make it so Connor finds out his dad’s a spy and unites with SPA to track down his murderer?
– What should the dad’s mission be? What’s the point in Connor killing the dad’s murderer? What did he do and how will he solve it?
– I’m a Canadian author, so should to setting of my novel take place somewhere in Canada? If so, where is the most common area for a spy and all this stuff take place?
– I don’t really want Connor, a 16 year old boy, to be killing people, I don’t want him to be a murderer YET, so how do you think I should go by this and have him get revenge but not reasonably kill his victim. I was thinking there would be non-armed killings, like a car chase or have someone else kill him, someone from SPA. If you know how I can get by this problem because it may be too graphic, do tell me!
Thanks guys, if you could answer this that would be greatly appreciated, I am sure I will take account everything you tell me, where it’s changing the whole novel because it’s too violent for a 16 year old. Anyways, thanks a lot, I promise I will give you credit somehow affiliated, and will remember you from time on. Thanks!

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