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Is This A Good Story Base?


Title says all.
The setting of the story is based on an internet café, which hits off from there. Other settings might be at the protagonist’s house, a hotel, or downtown restaurant or bar. The vibe that comes from these areas are rather odd and creepy, but also normal. The time the story will take place might be during the evening. It is also set in modern day, with phones, and computers (20th century). The area is in Seville, Barcelona.
The genre of this story is a Mystery-Horror-Thriller-Suspense-Espiona…
The main character will be 26 year old con-artist, involved with stock market scams, Nigerian market scams, Ponzi scams, and leads a casual mafia group. Her name will be Venetia De Luca. Her last name was changed to Moretti when she was taken in by the mafia. The character will be young and a professional, with natural grey eyes, her height will be 5’7, she is going to have blond, shoulder length hair. She also dresses very nice and expensive, as her “Job” provides an adequate amount of money. She also comes from a rich family, her parents were killed ( when she was 8) by a mafia leader who was threatened by her parents, and in the heat of the moment, the mafia leader killed her parents. She only got a small portion of inheritance, the rest went to charity. She also has an older brother, who disappeared after the accident. The reason she is a con-artist is because she hopes to meet her parent’s murderer and do something extremely downgrading to him.
The second main character will be her right hand man, who is also involved in the mafia. While she was in the orphanage after her parents died, a mafia member (sotto capo) took her hostage because her parents had mafia ties, and they were holding her ransom until the parents gave them money. They find out that her parents are dead. Throughout keeping the hostage, the group develops a soft spot for Venetia. The one who took the most care of her was a male named Damiano Moretti, the underboss in the group. Damiano is 6’4, with blond hair. He is now 43 years old. He helps Venetia to find the murderer, and supports her throughout the story by gaining information about the murderer, and does the dirty work. He cares about Venetia, and does not want her hands to be “bloodied” by the crime he has done. Venetia considers Damiano an older brother.
The villain of this story is named Callisto De Luca. He is Venetia’s older sibling. He had killed his parents because he had certain ties to the mafia, and the mafia wanted his inheritance. Callisto was meant to kill his entire family, but he begged for Venetia’s life. The mafia organization his was involved with did not allow it, but he still saved her life anyways. Out of guilt, after his parents death, he ran away. The mafia has a price on his head, and that’s how Venetia finds the murderer.
The story starts off with Venetia finding out about the accident of her parents in an internet café, while she is curiously searching up her old last name, whom she has never forgotten about. She finds an article on the internet about the murder of her parents, and her brother ran away. She had thought her parents and brother died in an car accident. Over the years, she has buried the painful memories, so she has tried covering up the true facts. She has vowed to find the murderer. Eventually, the name leads her to various crime organizations, and deals the family had done in secret. Through some research and snooping around in various bars, overhearing urban legends, she tricks the killer into meeting her in a hotel. The killer seems to be uncomfortable doing business with her. She is planning on killing the murderer. The moment she shoots the killer, she realizes it’s her brother. She decides to ravage the situation and take money from him, aswell as stripping him of his expensive clothes. While she took his jacket, a note falls out about how sorry he is, and how he was forced to kill his parents for the inheritance.

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I Need A Good Title For This Book I’m Writing And I Wanna Know How You Like The Summary Plz Giv Me A Title?


My book is about 6 girls all with different powers, they live in a world of angels and demons werewolves and vampires.The girls know they are different front. They live in a orphanage in the Bronx but only 5 of the girls they find the 6 at school. She was always there but they never notice until P.E. when they saw her birthmark on her thigh which look like a tattoo dragon which all them have on them some where. There names are Isis(black), Tori(white), Alex(Hispanic), Sam(White), Aliyah(White), Naomi(Hispanic) they all have a sort of a gothic look. Isis is the leader, she calls them her pack, light brown skin black brown hair, her eyes are usually dark brown but constantly changes color as her mood changes, Tori is the right hand man for Isis, she is a hot head with jet black hair, her voice is like Raven of of Teen Titans, Alex is a tomboy who love electronics and wrestling she is tough and insults and punches you quicker than you can say “nice tattoo” which she hates cuz she stress that it’s a birthmark, Sam is red hair green eyes, she is a smarty, and loves plants, but will punch you if think she’s just another pretty face, Aliyah blonde hair and blue eyed, she is mischevious, loud and sarcastic, she is the fun, but will kill if anyone messes with her pack and that leaves Naomi who is the quiet little mouse, she is scared of her powers, and is always picked on, but if you press the right buttons she can be a fighting machine who would mutilate anyone who messes with her and her pack. The girls are a new breed half angel and demon they are the most powerful of both halves they were found by a unknown source, the girls only know that they’ve been in a orphange as long as the were born and they were never given a family they are the only ones left at the orphange no one really want a group of 15 year olds. Naomi was taken end by a women but husband is a drunk and pervert. The pack takes her away from him. They end up being takening away one night as they are walking and use there powers to beat up some gang members by some bad cops and put on this black market like underground fighting place were vampires make other creature fight each other for money. After they arrive they are forced to fight, a member from a secret organization for young mixed breeds of werewolves vampires and angels and demons sees Isis fight and then sees her birhtmark. His name is Eric and buys them out Isis is very suspecious of him but goes along they meet a lady named Mira who holds they secrets of there past and destiny.

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I Need A Good Title For This Book I’m Writing And I Wanna Know How You Like The Summary Plz Giv Me A Title?


My book is about 6 girls all with different powers, they live in a world of angels and demons werewolves and vampires.The girls know they are different front. They live in a orphanage in the Bronx but only 5 of the girls they find the 6 at school. She was always there but they never notice until P.E. when they saw her birthmark on her thigh which look like a tattoo dragon which all them have on them some where. There names are Isis(black), Tori(white), Alex(Hispanic), Sam(White), Aliyah(White), Naomi(Hispanic) they all have a sort of a gothic look. Isis is the leader, she calls them her pack, light brown skin black brown hair, her eyes are usually dark brown but constantly changes color as her mood changes, Tori is the right hand man for Isis, she is a hot head with jet black hair, her voice is like Raven of of Teen Titans, Alex is a tomboy who love electronics and wrestling she is tough and insults and punches you quicker than you can say “nice tattoo” which she hates cuz she stress that it’s a birthmark, Sam is red hair green eyes, she is a smarty, and loves plants, but will punch you if think she’s just another pretty face, Aliyah blonde hair and blue eyed, she is mischevious, loud and sarcastic, she is the fun, but will kill if anyone messes with her pack and that leaves Naomi who is the quiet little mouse, she is scared of her powers, and is always picked on, but if you press the right buttons she can be a fighting machine who would mutilate anyone who messes with her and her pack. The girls are a new breed half angel and demon they are the most powerful of both halves they were found by a unknown source, the girls only know that they’ve been in a orphange as long as the were born and they were never given a family they are the only ones left at the orphange no one really want a group of 15 year olds. Naomi was taken end by a women but husband is a drunk and pervert. The pack takes her away from him. They end up being takening away one night as they are walking and use there powers to beat up some gang members by some bad cops and put on this black market like underground fighting place were vampires make other creature fight each other for money. After they arrive they are forced to fight, a member from a secret organization for young mixed breeds of werewolves vampires and angels and demons sees Isis fight and then sees her birhtmark. His name is Eric and buys them out Isis is very suspecious of him but goes along they meet a lady named Mira who holds they secrets of there past and destiny.

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I Need A Good Title For This Book I’m Writing And I Wanna Know How You Like The Summary Plz Giv Me A Title?


My book is about 6 girls all with different powers, they live in a world of angels and demons werewolves and vampires.The girls know they are different front. They live in a orphanage in the Bronx but only 5 of the girls they find the 6 at school. She was always there but they never notice until P.E. when they saw her birthmark on her thigh which look like a tattoo dragon which all them have on them some where. There names are Isis(black), Tori(white), Alex(Hispanic), Sam(White), Aliyah(White), Naomi(Hispanic) they all have a sort of a gothic look. Isis is the leader, she calls them her pack, light brown skin black brown hair, her eyes are usually dark brown but constantly changes color as her mood changes, Tori is the right hand man for Isis, she is a hot head with jet black hair, her voice is like Raven of of Teen Titans, Alex is a tomboy who love electronics and wrestling she is tough and insults and punches you quicker than you can say “nice tattoo” which she hates cuz she stress that it’s a birthmark, Sam is red hair green eyes, she is a smarty, and loves plants, but will punch you if think she’s just another pretty face, Aliyah blonde hair and blue eyed, she is mischevious, loud and sarcastic, she is the fun, but will kill if anyone messes with her pack and that leaves Naomi who is the quiet little mouse, she is scared of her powers, and is always picked on, but if you press the right buttons she can be a fighting machine who would mutilate anyone who messes with her and her pack. The girls are a new breed half angel and demon they are the most powerful of both halves they were found by a unknown source, the girls only know that they’ve been in a orphange as long as the were born and they were never given a family they are the only ones left at the orphange no one really want a group of 15 year olds. Naomi was taken end by a women but husband is a drunk and pervert. The pack takes her away from him. They end up being takening away one night as they are walking and use there powers to beat up some gang members by some bad cops and put on this black market like underground fighting place were vampires make other creature fight each other for money. After they arrive they are forced to fight, a member from a secret organization for young mixed breeds of werewolves vampires and angels and demons sees Isis fight and then sees her birhtmark. His name is Eric and buys them out Isis is very suspecious of him but goes along they meet a lady named Mira who holds they secrets of there past and destiny.

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I Need A Title For My Book Please Help Me?


My book is about 6 girls all with different powers, they live in a world of angels and demons werewolves and vampires.The girls know they are different front. They live in a orphanage in the Bronx but only 5 of the girls they find the 6 at school. She was always there but they never notice until P.E. when they saw her birthmark on her thigh which look like a tattoo dragon which all them have on them some where. There names are Isis(black), Tori(white), Alex(Hispanic), Sam(White), Aliyah(White), Naomi(Hispanic) they all have a sort of a gothic look. Isis is the leader, she calls them her pack, light brown skin black brown hair, her eyes are usually dark brown but constantly changes color as her mood changes, Tori is the right hand man for Isis, she is a hot head with jet black hair, her voice is like Raven of of Teen Titans, Alex is a tomboy who love electronics and wrestling she is tough and insults and punches you quicker than you can say “nice tattoo” which she hates cuz she stress that it’s a birthmark, Sam is red hair green eyes, she is a smarty, and loves plants, but will punch you if think she’s just another pretty face, Aliyah blonde hair and blue eyed, she is mischevious, loud and sarcastic, she is the fun, but will kill if anyone messes with her pack and that leaves Naomi who is the quiet little mouse, she is scared of her powers, and is always picked on, but if you press the right buttons she can be a fighting machine who would mutilate anyone who messes with her and her pack. The girls are a new breed half angel and demon they are the most powerful of both halves they were found by a unknown source, the girls only know that they’ve been in a orphange as long as the were born and they were never given a family they are the only ones left at the orphange no one really want a group of 15 year olds. Naomi was taken end by a women but husband is a drunk and pervert. The pack takes her away from him. They end up being takening away one night as they are walking and use there powers to beat up some gang members by some bad cops and put on this black market like underground fighting place were vampires make other creature fight each other for money. After they arrive they are forced to fight, a member from a secret organization for young mixed breeds of werewolves vampires and angels and demons sees Isis fight and then sees her birhtmark. His name is Eric and buys them out Isis is very suspecious of him but goes along they meet a lady named Mira who holds they secrets of there past and destiny.

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