There is a girl that works at a local market that I have a huge crush on. I decided to go for it and be her secret admirer! I don’t want to come off as a moron, so I need some help writing this letter.
“I’ve noticed your beauty and sunny personality from afar but I’ve never had the courage to say something. I soon found myself wondering what you were really like as a person. I hope you appreciate the beauty of this bouquet the same way I do yours when I see you.
Anyway, I hope these make you smile.”
The “I do yours when I see you” part sounds strange, doesn’t it?
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Secret Admirer Note- (grammar Help)?
Posted on September 11, 2012.
Leave off from afar . Wondering what you “are” really like . Also. leave off when I see you and Anyway
The whole thing sounds creepy like you’ve been stalking her. Try something simpler..
These flowers are beautiful like you. Hope they bring a smile to your face
scrap that whole sentence n just say, this bouquet reminded me of ur beauty, hope u like it…simple n to te poin