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Is This Song I Wrote Any Good?

this is a hard rock song
its called Swallowing the bomb
its about being overwhelmed
with some of the problems that come
with getting older
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
please, if you hear me
recite a silent prayer
wilted spine, from on-going time
niche of the servant
the profession somewhat crosses the line
imma pity-f**ker
stacked ten-high with more dilemmas
subjective pleaser
clutching onto my over-booked agenda
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
force you troubles on me
seriously doubt you care
syphon from me, give to the weak
completely drained
my defiance has a very severe leak
one-trick-monkey
hand down spoils, commence song & dance
insufficient funds
im not at all allowed even a second-glance
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
Albatross-cross to bear
please, if you hear me
recite a silent prayer
thanks for reading
im 15 btw

No Responses to “Is This Song I Wrote Any Good?”

  1. lilg says:

    I like it 😀 :-}

  2. nikivee says:

    Wow that song’s pretty deep for a fifteen year old.
    But it is a pretty good song. I can see some meaning in it. It’s kinda of like sad, lonely someone who has too much to carry.

  3. George says:

    From what I can tell it seems like it would be good. I’d need to hear the melody for it though. perhaps a YouTube link in the future if you record the melody? Lyrics are pretty good though.

  4. Aaron Ross says:

    Awesome! Food 4 a rap

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